I don't think the content in the paper "economic model" is good. Calling it an "economic model" on a metaverse website, I would expect it to explain the cashflow and how the metaverse works. The content focuses more on the "internal" rfox NFTs and kogs, instead of the overall Valt and how things will run. From page 12 and onwards, it's all about NFT releases from rfox. Looking at the paper, it does not look like you are creating an "open" metaverse for creators and businesses.

For example: On page 22 (complete NFT flow and secondary market fees), it is easy to misunderstand what is explained here, as it is written inside the general Valt economic paper. That part of the paper only applies to rfox's own created NFTs, right? So it's not really something I'd have in there because it kind of looks like a section for "general fee structure of the Valt".

I think the economic paper should be structured better and be much more general for the Valt. This should be the "blackpaper" of the Valt IMO.

Information about RFOX's own created NFT projects should be excluded from the paper completely and the information about these should be available in the relevant parts of the website(s) (CitiXens for example).